GTTGB - The Gate - Chapter 12

Chapter 12 of my Bionicle fanfiction: The Gate to the Great Beings.

THIS IS THE UPDATED VERSION OF THE CHAPTER.
EDIT (30.12.12):
Old description:
<sub>Chapters are very long, so read in your own time and pace.

What's with me and horrendous chapters? The above warning on 'long chapters' is an understatement. XD

Meh....I was hoping to have this chapter up a few weeks ago before Valentine's, but school stuff got in the way again. >_<" For those of you that saw the pic....well.... you'll know what I'm talking about.
Anyhow, very tricky portraying these two... I struggled a lot with the last couple of paragraphs with the 'realisation', since I had to wrap it up in both in a quick, but pleasing fashion. I'm not entirely satisfied with it, so I'll probably be changing some details in the future.

Well...this is the second last chapter of the first part of the story! I'll be posting up the very last one next week, to keep you poor munchkins from being tortured by endless waiting and my terrible procrastinating. XD (As long as HW doesn't kill me on the way first...)</sub>




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