GTTGB - Division, Neglect, Ambition - Chapter 2

Chapter 2 of Part 3: "Division, Neglect, Ambition" of my Bionicle fanfiction: The Gate to the Great Beings.

Yays, chapter two. More introductions. :3

For those of you that got confused with the front cover of this series, this chapter reveals majority of the characters pictured. I suggest you try and guess them first (not that difficult, the links are rather obvious).
If you're completely lost (which you shouldn't be), these are the characters on Part 3 cover:
- Figure just above Toa; Liviene
- Female character with blue tattoos; Enrin
- Gloomy figure to the right: Mordlan (obviously)
- Roundish character just above him: Thoroth
- Huge head on other side: Hierarch

The character right at the top of the front cover (just below the BIONICLE heading) will be revealed in due time.


I re-used a joke in here I drew a while ago. Digital cookie to those who can recognise it.

And ahhh, yes. Enrin was a character that came to mind the moment I started planning this book. :3 It was very amusing modelling her after someone evil but not being evil herself. XP
Though I think Livienne has easily become my favourite out of all the GBs. XD She's so hysteric. I have to admit I got some inspiration from the 'My Little Pony' character; Pinky (or whatever her name is; haven't really watched much of the show). The hyper-active optimism is contagious. XD
Thoroth is huggable. That's all. XD
And Mordlan....he'll be fun to write. Not fun to read, but certainly fun to write. Mwaahahahaha!!!

Yayyyy, rebellion!!!! What an original idea! Haven't seen many of those around. XP (obvious sarcasm)



Constructive criticism welcome.


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Bionicle and Toa Nuva belong to Lego.
This story idea belongs to me.